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Hi Guys, since Whodunit ended bad, where no one posted to the last part, I have decided to make a part 2 with more people!

Survivors Back For More In Whodunit?:
Niall, Rena, Amber, Brad, Princess, Alisha and Ollie since we were the ones to be left alive.
New People In Whodunit?:
[removed], Chanel, Rhianna, Ahmed, Oisin, Matt, Scott, Bat and Earthgirl :3.

RULES:
Please talk in third person, but only for P.O.V. (Point Of View) you can share your thoughts in first person.
You can swear, but censor it.
Please talk with descriptive writing and make the paragraphs as long or as short as you want.

OK, starting off with a proulougue (sp?):
It's been a while since three people died in Mullberry Manor, but now, a new terror is arising with the survivors coming back and new people coming aswell.
You have got a message that you are going to a huge beach resort, but the problem is that the place is deserted, away from any people, and one of these Simsforums fanatics is a murderer, but who is it?

OK, who wants to start off? (or I will if no one wants to)
I WILL!!!!!!!!

Niall, this has nothing against you, just setting up story plot Tongue


                                              (P.O.V)
 

                                  Wow! Arent I lucky to be invited to a beach resort! And all of my friends are coming too! Too mad Niall is there. He gets on my nerves, but I will bear with him.


        STORY

Brad was on plane, going to a beach resort. He had been needing a vacation, so he was up for it when a mysterious letter came to his house, with plane tickets. But, he went along with it. He had talked to his E-Friends about it, and they all said they got them too! How exciting it was for him! Some of his new friends were coming too, like [removed], Oisin, Matt, and Ahmed! He was excited to meet them.


  In another spot in the world, a killer was devising a master plan, in whick they would wipe out SimsForums, and all of its regulars! But the question is, WHODUNIT??!
Most of the new people stood huddled at the back of the room, looking at Brad.
"What?" Brad wondered, walking closer to them. Earthgirl walked shyly into the kitchen, turning back to look at the rest of the group.
Niall, Princess and Oisin were babbling away in Irish in the largest bedroom that they would be sharing with [removed].
"This place is so sweet!" Ahmed told Chanel in the games room. He dashed over to the closest arcade machine and turned it on.
"I can't believe I was invited here, this looks like a lot of fun!" Chanel smiled, walking over to a pinball machine.
Princess went to get a glass of water, when she returned Oisin and Niall were asleep.
It was approaching 11 p.m so Princess changed into her PJ's after rummaging in her suitcase and then clambered into bed and closed her eyes.
Scott, Bat and Matt were talking about making sure everyone is asleep before they go on a midnight stroll down the boardwalk.
(12 MIDNIGHT)
Bat and Matt went back home, after seeing nothing of interest, all the shops were closed.
(6 A.M)
When everyone woke up they were surprised to not find Scott in his bed.
"Hey, is Scott down stairs?" Ollie asked Rhianna who sleeps in the same room with him along with Brad and Alisha.
" He didn't come back last n-" Rhianna told Ollie before a blood-curdling scream echoed through the hall.
When everyone came downstairs, Amber was on the floor crying about Scott.
When Matt looked behind Amber's shoulder, Scott lay on the floor, a gun shot wound grafted on his throat.

(Sorry I killed Scott in the first post, just there's a lot of people. Also, someone has to die every three to five posts now)
(OKay Smile!)

Niall, Rena, Amber, Brad, Princess, Alisha and Ollie all gasped, then sighed. "AGAIN!?!?!?!??!!?!??!!?!?!?!" they chorused.
"What?" Earth Girl asked. "What do you mean 'again'?".
"Some of us went through this SAME thing in a haunted manor last year!
We never found out WHODUNNIT!!!"

(Brad's P.O.V.)
Its the manor all over again!! WTH is with this! This is seriously getting on my nerves.
Ollie walked over to where Scott lay dead to have a look at the wounds. Finaly Oliver said something."I think he got shot with some kind of shot gun im not sure what though"."Wow i wounder what happend last night, anyway if this mystery person does it again i think we should all stay together" Niall said. Suddenly Matt mubled out something but nobody could hear him."Comon what are we standing around here for? I'll call the police" Earth girl said while dailing for police.
"Noooooooooooo dont call anyone half of us have been through this before we dont need anyone else involved" Brad yelled while approching  Earth girl!
Your getting better at this, Ollie! {clap}

Niall's P.O.V.
This isn't happening again, a shot-gun? The person who is the murderer certainly has a mean streak to actually pick up a shot-gun and force themselves to pull the trigger.

Continuing...

"I guess your right, you've been through this before and I haven't..." Earthgirl replied solemnly, putting the phone back into its holder.
"We might need to find clues for this tragic death, but how can we find them?" Matt asked the group, his face full with thought.
"Maybe it would be better if we looked around the island for any signs or traces leading up to Scott's death." Amber wondered.
Out of the corner of her eye, she saw Ahmed and Bat sneak out the door and dash down from the window.
"Guys, why did Bat and Ahmed run outside?" Niall said, witnessing this also. Rhianna and Chanel looked at eachother in confusion and Brad and Princess looked at the door.
"I'll go check it out." Oisin added, walking to the door with Rena close behind him. "I'm coming too." Rena whispered, as she opened the door and creeped along the boardwalk with Oisin.
"I'll just make dinner...." Earthgirl sighed.
Osin opend the door Rena and him looked everywhere, But no one was there. "Im ganna check it out too",Ollie said walking out of the door."Accutaly i think you should all come", Ollie poked his head around the door," Remember we stick together". Suddenly a loud deafening Scream filled the air.
Everyone ran outside searching while the scream continued then stopped!
"That...sounded like Earthgirl..." Amber muttered, as she and Rena cuddled, scared. The gang all waddled over to the kitchen, being careful incase there was another dead body. Earthgirl was still alive, but was kissing her hand, jumping up and down.
"Find a real boyfriend!" Ollie called out jokingly. Earthgirl gave him a threatening stare, then ran to the sink, rushing cool water on her hand.
"What happened? Was it you who was screaming?" Matt asked, being so layed back and calm, Chanel grabbed Amber's arm, who was holding onto Rena, and pulled them toward the front, as they were the smallest.
"I'm not dead, don't worry..." Earth whispered.
"No kidding..." Oisin replied. Niall nudged him and told him to be quiet.
"I was just cooking dinner for us, right? Over the stove. Then, someone pushed me from behind, onto the stove. I luckily put my hand down before my body..." she explained. Everyone gasped, staring at Earth's burnt hand. In big bold letters, it read...

WHODUNIT?
"Earthgirl, maybe you should lie down. Rena get her a cold towel to put on that hand and I'll carry on with the dinner." Matt told them, being the oldest.
Rena ran into the bathroom, while Niall and Oisin fluffed up some of the pillows on the couch for her.
"Why are Rhianna and Alisha so quiet, they're just sitting in the cold room all-day!" Niall exclaimed in a hushed tone.
"Niall, we better go check it out, they've been down there for a really long time, it's not good for them." Oisin whispered as they sneaked down the hall towards the stairs.
Soon, everyone was finished as they sat down outside in the garden area to eat some food.
No sun and no clouds just blank indigo skies and the yellow light of the hall drifting down towards the table.
Amber and Chanel looked down at the spaghetti and twirled it around on the fork.
Ollie glanced at Brad many times, before he said "What are you staring at?"
"Oh, nothing just some sauce on your chin..." Oliver uttered, shoving in a mouthful of meatball into his mouth.
Ahmed flung a piece of spaghetti into the night, Matt glared at him. It was so quiet, the hum of the light was the only thing that could be heard.
Suddenly, a crashing sound of something breaking belted against tiles.
"It's coming from the kitchen!" Ollie shouted, before everyone went to check it out.
Everyone ran to the kitchen. They were surprised to see a decapitated Ahmed, blood everywhere. We saw a blood-soaked string, tight, like a trap, tied to the knife holder. It looked like Ahmed tripped the trap, and the knives did their job. Amber and Chanel screamed, while Ollie looked expressionless. "WHODUNIT?"Brad asked. "Who would have done this!?"
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