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Criminal Class
22-01-2015, 10:56 AM (This post was last modified: 22-01-2015 10:57 AM by Ollie.)
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RE: Criminal Class
Chp. 4 The Plot Thickens


"Sounds like you had quite a good time last night then?" Gloria comment after I had explained how I had met Xavier the previous night and things had gotten off to a great start.
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"What can I say, I think he's 'the one'," I smiled."Anyway, I'm going to go head out to the gym with Trisha-try and convince her to come over to the party later."
"Well okay, I'll go and get ready while you're out."
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"So is he really that good?" Trisha pondered aloud.
"Are you kidding me?! He was so dreamy-much better than that crackpot Carlos," I answered.
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"You sure you can't come to the party today to meet Xavier? I mean com'on, it's for my mother," I asked of Trisha, punching a bag.
"I would love to, but you know I have to drive out of town-I have that big gig tonight in Frodo Valley," Trish replied. "Anyway, I really should get going now-pack my bags, shower get changed and go. Sorry."
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"Alright, bye."

A fair few hours passed and we were ready for the black and white bash I had planned for my mother in celebration of her life-it had only been a month or so ago that we had been informed that Gloria had a life threatening cancer, with mom refusing treatment she always said, "If god thinks it's my time to go, then it's my time to go."
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It wasn't long before the gracious guests began to arrive.
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While attempting to mix a few drinks a rude racist came up to me and began insulting me, but I took his comments with little offence.
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Mom on the inside appeared to be having a good time, chatting with a few fellow friends.
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It wasn't long before Xavier and I hit it off, he was a great guy, shooing off my attacker.
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He was the best, a classic, he pulled out a red rose from his back and gifted it to me.
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I continued to embrace and hug him, he was just too perfect.
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A first kiss then ensued.
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Of course one thing lead to another then...
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It was a great day for me, but after the party I watched as my mother seemed to become less and less happy-she was slowly turning into a state of depression.
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I felt I had no choice but to confront her.
"Mom, what's up?" I began to ponder.
"oh nothing, don't worry hun," she was quick to reply.
"Mom, I know something's up, what is it?"
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"Fine, fine, I've just been thinking recently..."
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"Thinking about what?"
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"Your brother-I miss him," Mom explained. "He seemingly just disappeared from the face of the Earth-I just want to hear from him again-"
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"Mom, you know he didn't just 'disappear', he ran away, he doesn't care about us anymore-that was years ago-he's gone, just like dad," I interrupted.
"It's not about that-he's my son-I just want to hear from him-I want to help him-I want to understand him," Mom struck me.
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"I'll see if I can do anything about it," I smiled. "Anything else on your mind."
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"Please just take things slow with Xavier-don't mess it up," Gloria gave her usual words of wisdom. "One second you think you have them, the next they're gone. Take it seriously."
"Okay Mom."
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Morning rose in Willow Creek.
I was awoken by the rumble of a car pulling up outside the house.
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"Hello, I was wondering if Jennifer Sanders is around?" A mysterious woman inquired.
"Yes actually, she's inside-watch out though, she isn't quite an early bird."
"Thank-you."
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Criminal Class - Ollie - 26-09-2014, 04:53 AM
RE: Criminal Class - Caspin - 26-09-2014, 08:39 AM
RE: Criminal Class - Ollie - 26-09-2014, 09:40 AM
RE: Criminal Class - Minty - 26-09-2014, 11:54 PM
RE: Criminal Class - Ollie - 27-09-2014, 12:09 AM
RE: Criminal Class - Caspin - 27-09-2014, 12:11 PM
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RE: Criminal Class - Ollie - 01-11-2014, 06:56 AM
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RE: Criminal Class - Ollie - 15-11-2014, 06:26 AM
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RE: Criminal Class - Caspin - 16-12-2014, 10:37 AM
RE: Criminal Class - Paul - 17-12-2014, 01:28 AM
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RE: Criminal Class - Ollie - 22-01-2015 10:56 AM
RE: Criminal Class - Wandarine - 22-01-2015, 04:25 PM
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