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A poem I wrote during freetime in math today. - yoshman9000 - 07-05-2009 10:32 PM

Its not really a poem, its more like dialog. Though I put it in a poem format because Its really short. Well, enjoy! Big Grin

I starred
At my enemy
Her green eyes
Were gleaming in the sun

I slowly
Picked up my knife
And aimed it at her
Ready to kill her

The knife
Was shining
And was furiously bright
In her eyes

I looked
Up at the sky
Praying for victory

Warmth wrapped
Around my body
But not from
The hot summer day

My enemy
Had embraced
Myself
In her arms

I glanced
Down at her
And saw her
Crying salty tears

She climbed
Onto my head
And pressed her lips
Against mine

I shockingly
Widened my eye lids
And wrapped my arms
Around her

My adhorrence
For this girl
Had turned
Into deep love

And love was destined to stay

Re: A poem I wrote during freetime in math today. - CountryGal4132 - 07-05-2009 10:48 PM

interesting and weird, but I like it.  I sometimes write poems in school too actually.  Smile

Re: A poem I wrote during freetime in math today. - yoshman9000 - 07-05-2009 10:54 PM

Thanks.

Its about two people who were sentenced to kill each other, but end up falling in love.

Yes, I'm weird like that.  Tongue

Re: A poem I wrote during freetime in math today. - CountryGal4132 - 07-05-2009 10:56 PM

hey, without weirdness life would be so boring.  I'm weird myself so I totally get that lol!  Actually knowing the background to your poem makes me like it even more...and appreciate it more.

Re: A poem I wrote during freetime in math today. - Cassie - 07-05-2009 11:28 PM

Yaaay, you kept writing. I love it. I had the sudden urge to annotate it... ehm, weird I know. But we're studying poems in English and we have to annotate them all. Zzzz. xP
I love how he sets out intending to kill her though, and in the end he falls in love... sort of like my fandom ships, but a bit more dramatic [with the knife and killing and all that, lol].
How long did it take you to write that? Just a lesson?

Re: A poem I wrote during freetime in math today. - Ugly Von - 07-05-2009 11:29 PM

Ahah, nice.
We had to write limericks last week.

Re: A poem I wrote during freetime in math today. - yoshman9000 - 08-05-2009 09:31 PM

(07-05-2009 11:28 PM)PixieLott link Wrote:Yaaay, you kept writing. I love it. I had the sudden urge to annotate it... ehm, weird I know. But we're studying poems in English and we have to annotate them all. Zzzz. xP
I love how he sets out intending to kill her though, and in the end he falls in love... sort of like my fandom ships, but a bit more dramatic [with the knife and killing and all that, lol].
How long did it take you to write that? Just a lesson?

It took me literally ten minutes to write this. I did it on my own. 8)

Re: A poem I wrote during freetime in math today. - gothika - 09-05-2009 03:15 AM

Nice ^^
I write poems myself. There should be a poetry thread :]
I never really heard of people falling in love and they were eniemes. Except Romeo and Juliet.
Very clever.

Re: A poem I wrote during freetime in math today. - serp3821 - 09-05-2009 03:17 AM

its okay