A poem I wrote during freetime in math today.

[yoshman9000]

Its not really a poem, its more like dialog. Though I put it in a poem format because Its really short. Well, enjoy!

I starred
At my enemy
Her green eyes
Were gleaming in the sun

I slowly
Picked up my knife
And aimed it at her
Ready to kill her

The knife
Was shining
And was furiously bright
In her eyes

I looked
Up at the sky
Praying for victory

Warmth wrapped
Around my body
But not from
The hot summer day

My enemy
Had embraced
Myself
In her arms

I glanced
Down at her
And saw her
Crying salty tears

She climbed
Onto my head
And pressed her lips
Against mine

I shockingly
Widened my eye lids
And wrapped my arms
Around her

My adhorrence
For this girl
Had turned
Into deep love

And love was destined to stay

[CountryGal4132]

interesting and weird, but I like it.  I sometimes write poems in school too actually. 

[yoshman9000]

Thanks.

Its about two people who were sentenced to kill each other, but end up falling in love.

Yes, I'm weird like that. 

[CountryGal4132]

hey, without weirdness life would be so boring.  I'm weird myself so I totally get that lol!  Actually knowing the background to your poem makes me like it even more...and appreciate it more.

[Cassie]

Yaaay, you kept writing. I love it. I had the sudden urge to annotate it... ehm, weird I know. But we're studying poems in English and we have to annotate them all. Zzzz. xP
I love how he sets out intending to kill her though, and in the end he falls in love... sort of like my fandom ships, but a bit more dramatic [with the knife and killing and all that, lol].
How long did it take you to write that? Just a lesson?

[Ugly Von]

Ahah, nice.
We had to write limericks last week.

[yoshman9000]

(07-05-2009 11:28 PM)PixieLott link Wrote:Yaaay, you kept writing. I love it. I had the sudden urge to annotate it... ehm, weird I know. But we're studying poems in English and we have to annotate them all. Zzzz. xP
I love how he sets out intending to kill her though, and in the end he falls in love... sort of like my fandom ships, but a bit more dramatic [with the knife and killing and all that, lol].
How long did it take you to write that? Just a lesson?

It took me literally ten minutes to write this. I did it on my own. 8)

[gothika]

Nice ^^
I write poems myself. There should be a poetry thread :]
I never really heard of people falling in love and they were eniemes. Except Romeo and Juliet.
Very clever.

[serp3821]

its okay